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    #16
    Ok so this one was definitely written as a kid, so I'm kind of laughing about lambs and goats living in harmony right now

    I saw a stream which looked like ebony
    That drifted slowly round the lovely bay
    And came to carry me from where I lay;
    The waves were laughing full of irony, (I'm not sure why the waves were laughing full of irony except that I found life ironic in general and also thought my own romanticism was absurd so I guess that would be why)
    Then turned to poems heard so long ago:
    They sang me soft words of Cumberland plateaus
    Where lambs and goats all lived in harmony
    But then it switched to poems so ancient
    Of legends much deeper than sparkling gold,
    Of the brightest moons of bold lemony
    Songs, then, of a butler the best of them all (This was not a random line about a butler I promise. It was me thinking I was clever and referencing Yeats)
    So now I just listen, simply enthralled.
    Last edited by SpiritoftheGael; 04-20-2020, 09:40 PM.
    The day is done, and the darkness

    Falls from the wings of Night,

    As a feather is wafted downward

    From an eagle in his flight.


    I see the lights of the village

    Gleam through the rain and the mist,

    And a feeling of sadness comes o'er me

    That my soul cannot resist:


    A feeling of sadness and longing,

    That is not akin to pain,

    And resembles sorrow only

    As the mist resembles the rain.

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      #17
      Also definitely a kid when I wrote this one.

      The Sun of Liberty

      A land of green and joyous poverty (joyous poverty sounds cringey to me now but I was definitely referencing the poverty of Ireland after the British tried to destroy them and how they kept their spirit despite that)
      Doth lie twixt brewing sky and sunny day;
      And Tis here she danced on ancient property,
      Here where she overlooked the shining bay:
      Of fine mist which rides the helm of shining sea
      May someday carry her so far away
      She'll dance in windy skies of liberty
      And then fly wing to wing like jay to jay
      Over mountains, of warmish bluish grey;
      Presently she bides the time to see the free
      For tis a journey set the hardest way,
      A journey difficult even for sidhe
      But now she's on her way to sunny skies
      So now the sun is setting whilst the rise.
      Last edited by SpiritoftheGael; 04-20-2020, 09:41 PM.
      The day is done, and the darkness

      Falls from the wings of Night,

      As a feather is wafted downward

      From an eagle in his flight.


      I see the lights of the village

      Gleam through the rain and the mist,

      And a feeling of sadness comes o'er me

      That my soul cannot resist:


      A feeling of sadness and longing,

      That is not akin to pain,

      And resembles sorrow only

      As the mist resembles the rain.

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        #18
        This one is very very old. Probably under age 10. Animal hehe I don't really change at all. lol. Me as a child was still obsessing with the ocean and water.
        I


        The waves roll crashing glassy founts of salt
        The race begins with waves, foaming with malt
        Each one carrying its great heavy load
        As they crash with sand they go out for more
        And some do know where is great ancient lore
        Like treasure man does seek deep in the sea
        Or things man does not know like mysterious things
        Which are hidden far down with ancient rings
        Guarded by poisonous fish of the sea
        And here lands lie filled with mermaids and silkies
        Who play and frolic among periwinkles
        And the only ones who know this great thing
        Are children saved by bright mermaids
        Who take them out where they can knee deep wade
        Many a child tells this story, but none believe it.
        II.


        I myself was one of these young children
        Who now explores deep into the wildern
        Searching vast and deep for these great secrets
        Searching for magical creatures like elves
        Also for things like dwarves who dig deep and delve
        But always to the ocean I return
        To see the beautiful white crested helms
        I dive deep, but always return full of overwhelm
        I see Atlantis but never what I seek
        Gold coins I find but never what I seek
        And then I start to gasp and am very weak
        So yet again I find not what I seek
        Though I become great for finding some things
        I would rather find more important things
        And my own desire mermaids of the sea
        III.


        Part 3 was lost. We believe it to be about how he lost unconsciousness in the sea.
        The day is done, and the darkness

        Falls from the wings of Night,

        As a feather is wafted downward

        From an eagle in his flight.


        I see the lights of the village

        Gleam through the rain and the mist,

        And a feeling of sadness comes o'er me

        That my soul cannot resist:


        A feeling of sadness and longing,

        That is not akin to pain,

        And resembles sorrow only

        As the mist resembles the rain.

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          #19
          Forever

          You dreamed of living on forever
          As you tore the fabric off my mind;
          You built realities for us together
          As we jumped strands of time with so much to find.

          Alas the butterfly effect that changed our fate,
          Oh my love is it really all too late?

          I feel you in my heart, dancing on forever.
          Oh my dear mad scientist what have we wrought?
          We've diverged from a line now lost to the ether,
          But forever, in energy, you've been caught
          And somewhere, my time lord, we're not apart.
          The day is done, and the darkness

          Falls from the wings of Night,

          As a feather is wafted downward

          From an eagle in his flight.


          I see the lights of the village

          Gleam through the rain and the mist,

          And a feeling of sadness comes o'er me

          That my soul cannot resist:


          A feeling of sadness and longing,

          That is not akin to pain,

          And resembles sorrow only

          As the mist resembles the rain.

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